Date: 23.12.2006 & 24.12.2006
Christmas vacationkku Kancheepuram polamnu ticket ellam munnadiye book panniten.. APSRTC bus...scheduled to depart from platform no 24 at 2300 hrs... Seekramaave (10 pm) auto yeritten.. Bangalorela rendu vishayam romba common..onnu Software engineers.. innonu traffic jams...No awards for guessing what happened next.. yes..traffic jamla maatikitten.. Veetlendu Dhoni batting madiri aakroshama kelambi vandha auto..bus stand kitta vara vara Dravid batting madiri inch by incha move panna aarambichidhu...konja neram wait panna panna inch millimeter aachu.. nadandhu poravan ellam engala over take panni poradha paathu "Singam ondru purapattadhe" stylela vandiya vittu erangi nadandhe poyidalaamnu nadakka aarambichen.. konja dooram pona dhaan therinjidhu andha side vandha yellarum nadakka aarambichitaanga.. nadandhu varranvangalukke traffic jam.. first time experience panren..mothathula oru arasiyal katchi perani madiri irundhudhu...
oru vazhiya nadandhu, thavazhndhu, odi, kudhichi,nondi, urundu bus stand poi sendhen.. ennaku 24th platform enga varumnu theriyaadhu.. so ENQUIRY kitta poi keklamnu paatha andha madiri onnu kaanave kaanom.. ENQUIRY enganu kandu pidikka innoru ENQUIRY vechi aaganumnu oru kataayam..Anga poi ketta ozhungana badhil varala..vazhila yaarume ozhungana vazhi sollala.. so naane ennoda MATHEMATICALLY ANALYTICAL THINKING use panni 23rdkku appram thaan 24th varumnu yosichi... 23rd platform kandu pidikka kelambinen.. Bus standa moonu thadava suthi vandhu..(Adhe sutha naan Arasa maratha suthi irundhenna ennake kozhandha porandhirukum) kandu pidichen.. appramathaan therinjidhu 23rd platform thaan last plat form.. adhukku appram irukaradhu THIRANDHA VELI PUL VELIKAZHAGAM (Courtesy :Vivek).. anga ellarum Kaalai, maalai, iravu kadanellam thiruppi kuduthu kittu irundhaanga..
Ange irundhu APSRTC counterla poi ketta vandi innum varala.. vandhu 24th platform vazhya pogumnu telugula sonnar.. ennoda prachanaiye indha 24th platformthaannu avarukku theriyala..naan manasa thalara vidaama "24th platform eppudu vochesindhi" nu ketten.. avaru sonnadhu "JAGADEKA VEERULU ADHILOGA SUNDARI GAARU SAMARPINCHINAARU" appadinu ennaku kettuchi..seri..inimel pesi okati dubbukum prayojinam illanu mudivu panni naan ennoda theduthal vettaya thodanginen.. andha 24th platforma DCP RAGHAVAN (VV)naala kooda kandu pidikka mudiyaadha alavukku engayo marachi vechirundhaanga.. Ennoda anjavadhu suthula yedeichaiya 14th platform appram kottavi viduradhukku thalaya thookina 24th platformnu ezhidhi irundhichi.. Adapaavingala..indha bangalore kaarangalukku yaaru da maths sollikuduthaanu manasula Ivanga Kanakulla PULI illa PULIKESI nu nenaichikittu oru vazhiya 24th platform reach pannen..
2300 hrs kku vara vendiya bus 0030 hrs ku vandhuchi..naanum yeri ukkara ponen.. ennoda seat no 21.. seat no 20 la oru lady.. innum solla pona ondra lady... edho periya manasu panni ennoda seatla konja edatha baaki vittu irundhaanga...cinema theatrela climax scenela audience seat nunila ukkandhu padam pakura madiri.. naanum seat nunila ukkandhen.. bus kelambina konja nerathula edho oru Telugu padam potaanga.. adhuvum Balakrishna act panna padam.. Avaru padam ellam namma Captain padathoda comedya irukum... ivanga rendu perukku mattum gravity is Zero... tharaila nikkave pidikaadha indha rendu paer padathoda heroines paatheenganna ivanga pethi oda classmatesa irupaanga... Andha madiri oru heroineoda duet paatu dance aadi kittu irundhar Balakrishna... Yellow pant, Dark green shirt..pink shoes.. indha kodumaiya paakurathukku nuni seat la ukkandhu thoonguradhe mel nu nenaichi thoonga aarambichen..
Rendu nimisham kooda aagi irukaadhu..adhukkula ennaku munnadi irundhavar utta korattai sathathaala busla irundha ellarukum thoonkam Govinda.. naanum pala vidhamaana korattai satham kettu iruken.. idhu rombave differenta irundhichi.. Korattaila mimicry pannaruna paathukonga.. Auto odura madiri.. train start panni..odi..nikkura madiri.. singam garjikura madiri.. nadu nadula T Rajendhar padura madiri.. ippadi pala vidhama korattai vittadhula duet paadi kittu irundha Balakrishnave konja neram nirithittu idha vedikkai paaka aarambichitaar..Adutha konja nerathula Kancheepurame vandhudichi.. aanalum andha korattai satham kaadhulendu poga rendu naal aachu....
oru vazhiya nadandhu, thavazhndhu, odi, kudhichi,nondi, urundu bus stand poi sendhen.. ennaku 24th platform enga varumnu theriyaadhu.. so ENQUIRY kitta poi keklamnu paatha andha madiri onnu kaanave kaanom.. ENQUIRY enganu kandu pidikka innoru ENQUIRY vechi aaganumnu oru kataayam..Anga poi ketta ozhungana badhil varala..vazhila yaarume ozhungana vazhi sollala.. so naane ennoda MATHEMATICALLY ANALYTICAL THINKING use panni 23rdkku appram thaan 24th varumnu yosichi... 23rd platform kandu pidikka kelambinen.. Bus standa moonu thadava suthi vandhu..(Adhe sutha naan Arasa maratha suthi irundhenna ennake kozhandha porandhirukum) kandu pidichen.. appramathaan therinjidhu 23rd platform thaan last plat form.. adhukku appram irukaradhu THIRANDHA VELI PUL VELIKAZHAGAM (Courtesy :Vivek).. anga ellarum Kaalai, maalai, iravu kadanellam thiruppi kuduthu kittu irundhaanga..
Ange irundhu APSRTC counterla poi ketta vandi innum varala.. vandhu 24th platform vazhya pogumnu telugula sonnar.. ennoda prachanaiye indha 24th platformthaannu avarukku theriyala..naan manasa thalara vidaama "24th platform eppudu vochesindhi" nu ketten.. avaru sonnadhu "JAGADEKA VEERULU ADHILOGA SUNDARI GAARU SAMARPINCHINAARU" appadinu ennaku kettuchi..seri..inimel pesi okati dubbukum prayojinam illanu mudivu panni naan ennoda theduthal vettaya thodanginen.. andha 24th platforma DCP RAGHAVAN (VV)naala kooda kandu pidikka mudiyaadha alavukku engayo marachi vechirundhaanga.. Ennoda anjavadhu suthula yedeichaiya 14th platform appram kottavi viduradhukku thalaya thookina 24th platformnu ezhidhi irundhichi.. Adapaavingala..indha bangalore kaarangalukku yaaru da maths sollikuduthaanu manasula Ivanga Kanakulla PULI illa PULIKESI nu nenaichikittu oru vazhiya 24th platform reach pannen..
2300 hrs kku vara vendiya bus 0030 hrs ku vandhuchi..naanum yeri ukkara ponen.. ennoda seat no 21.. seat no 20 la oru lady.. innum solla pona ondra lady... edho periya manasu panni ennoda seatla konja edatha baaki vittu irundhaanga...cinema theatrela climax scenela audience seat nunila ukkandhu padam pakura madiri.. naanum seat nunila ukkandhen.. bus kelambina konja nerathula edho oru Telugu padam potaanga.. adhuvum Balakrishna act panna padam.. Avaru padam ellam namma Captain padathoda comedya irukum... ivanga rendu perukku mattum gravity is Zero... tharaila nikkave pidikaadha indha rendu paer padathoda heroines paatheenganna ivanga pethi oda classmatesa irupaanga... Andha madiri oru heroineoda duet paatu dance aadi kittu irundhar Balakrishna... Yellow pant, Dark green shirt..pink shoes.. indha kodumaiya paakurathukku nuni seat la ukkandhu thoonguradhe mel nu nenaichi thoonga aarambichen..
Rendu nimisham kooda aagi irukaadhu..adhukkula ennaku munnadi irundhavar utta korattai sathathaala busla irundha ellarukum thoonkam Govinda.. naanum pala vidhamaana korattai satham kettu iruken.. idhu rombave differenta irundhichi.. Korattaila mimicry pannaruna paathukonga.. Auto odura madiri.. train start panni..odi..nikkura madiri.. singam garjikura madiri.. nadu nadula T Rajendhar padura madiri.. ippadi pala vidhama korattai vittadhula duet paadi kittu irundha Balakrishnave konja neram nirithittu idha vedikkai paaka aarambichitaar..Adutha konja nerathula Kancheepurame vandhudichi.. aanalum andha korattai satham kaadhulendu poga rendu naal aachu....
15 comments:
Mamuuuuu,
hmmmm so adding a another feather to ur cap.....the way u have written is and compared with certain things is really commendable man ....shall pray for u to get an opportunity to reveal ur talents (single meaning) to a good script writer......
hahaha
first, good job done...one thing that i noticed when i read this is tat your style is similar to that of GK Chesterton...you pick up some commmon topic rather an incident and go about relating things..but what you lack is the flow and sometimes details...and if you read any of Chesterton's works towards the end it wud end with some msg to the readers...he would give details of the incident in a satirical way and say how kundi people are(no profanity meant)...you can try something of that sort...i 'm not saying you to loose your originality...'m jus saying it wud be better if its done this way....
and sometimes you make the reader lose interest.....something cud be done on this
Ippadikku,
Payanam mudvatharukkaga kathukodu irrukkum oru Payani.
Language:
Choice of words is good, but why not try sth different like pure Tamil words? You can improve your vocabulary:-)
Style:
You are sticking to the same "narrate with analogy" style
Not different from what youve been trying so far, so goes in the monotonous way. Some places, your words seem to offend some personalities, take care!! There is a high influence of cinema and personalities in your narrative, as usual. That doesnt help in the long run
Humor:
Still no pure comedy is achieved. You rely more on humors based
on analogies and spoof. At some places you express a good sense of humour which deserves a good appreciation
Good work, but plenty of scope for improvement..
Dear Payani,
Thank u for ur frank and honest comments.. First of all I dont even know who Mr.Chesterton is.. And if the style of writing is similar.. thats just coincidence.. I want to keep my originality as u had mentioned. And one more thing.. I dont believe in giving messages at the end.. I am not a philosopher.. I am just trying my best to keep the readers happy and forget their worries.. Its like a comedy movie without logic.. just laugh it out Kinds... And I ll seriously work on the making it more interesting.. THANKS A TON.. I ll appreciate if u wud continue being a critic for my future blogs..
Dey Muthuvel,
YES..I rely on analogy, spoofs,incident based humour.. but i dont want to change my style.. everyone has their own style of humour..For eg Goundamani And Senthil.. Goundamani has to keep beating Senthil.. Audience will not say No.. in every movie..the style will be the same.. but the concept is different..if they change the style..audience might not accept it..So i am tryin to develop my own style..So.i dont want to experiment a lot.. may be in a small way or so...(even thought i tried experimenting)..
nice to know that you 've given a consideration to my comment...i wud like to add a lil..you dont have to know who Chesterton is..i was mentioning that just to compare your work with someone of ur kind..and to me you are a philosopher too.. in your own way..to quote you"i try to keep the readers happy",..,a good philosophy...and the logic doesnt matter..all i am trying to say is this..you dont have to convey a msg..you can make the reader think or rather imagine..it may be anything...for eg. the reader shd feel himself travelling in the bus when he reads this post..the one gift that all good writers have in 'em...and btw i like your way of looking at life...the lighter part of life..sadly,i dont belong there...if possible try reading "On Running After One's Hat" by Chesterton..and i think you 'll love this book"hitchhicker's guide to the galaxy" by Douglas Adams..
Ippadikku,
Payani
Payani avargale.. Thanx for your comments.. shall work on ur suggestions..
Dai Panni vayae,
onnumae theriyaa officela kalatha ootura panni paya nee..
Every body knows abt u at work..
:):):):)
ur friend ;):):)
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